Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by nick711 03-12-2008 11:37,   ... This is a well-thought out plot. But you need to have more emotion with the killer; I can't say he frightens me at all. But good work.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story