Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Fenster 03-11-2008 06:37,   ... I had a reply prepared which I lost, so I'll wing it:    Good point on the numbers. I wasn't sure what I should use so I tried both, although I've since updated the article.    This story is actually just the end of a much longer piece that I've been writing on and off for a while. There's an older draft on my website that you can look at if you like:    http://www.bhalash.com/files/ docs/ee.pdf    The characters are more fleshed out, more background, etc. I posted the end as it was because this scene is what the story boils down to: Screaming, uncontrollable terror.    I do plan to finish Express Elevator, but I want to try some more short pieces so I can get my stride first.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story