Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by cookingWine 03-10-2008 20:29,   ... This is a pretty self-indulgent piece (in this case, I'm not using that as a detraction). The writing screams that you were really searching for the right word, and that tends to be a sign that's there's investment going into it.    It's hard for other people to enjoy these types of thing generally because the meaning is so shrouded. It could be anything, honestly, the subject is interchangeable and can still make sense.    For me, it made sense as related to religion or God, what have you.     It made sense as that battle between keeping faith and losing it, and I got a strong feeling of that story about how many days it took God to create the world starting with the line about the darkness and the sun still on the horizon.     City off in the distance, travels not allowed to reach it. IE, any religious person has wondered about getting to heaven and all that jazz.    It discussed a bit of the futility, and a bit of the hopefulness, that can come with faith.    But hell, let me know via message.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story