Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by cookingWine 03-10-2008 20:15,   ... I agree with the bit about the frantic voice. Very good job writing this, although I could have used less prodding about how he destroyed humanity.    One theme I'm finding in your writing that I can generally comment on each story is that, you're very, very close to doing a great job, and the only thing that's holding you back is that you seem to feel obligated to MAKE your audience know what is going on. Which to me, is never as fun or as satisfying as finding out for ourselves.   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story