Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Egoist 03-10-2008 19:15,   ... I feel as though he thinks more about the surrounding than her, which makes her taunting in a sense. The word use was extraordinary. For how short it was, I feel as though in real life it would take two minutes for the entire thing to take place--it's still good of course.    I didn't get so much imagery out of this one as I did the last, but there seemed to be something else that replaced that. Another perfect.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story