Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Egoist 03-10-2008 19:12,   ... I actually got this sickening feeling in my stomach from reading this. He knows the next day will be the same, but he doesn't want to leave because it's his place to relax.     I enjoyed this one a lot and I can't find any 'good' errors. I think the imagery and the metaphors were perfect. My favorite part would probably be the 'positive' description of Jen. It seemed to have stuck out to me.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story