Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by gsaracen 03-10-2008 06:12,   ... yeah with this poem I was going for a more orthodox universal feel. But it IS actually based on real feelings and emotions, just ones that I share with very many other people. That's why it is so... common. In a sense. Because... there are things about me that are unique, and there are things about me that are typical.    Also, was focusing more on language in this one. I like it for what it is. It isn't very different or eccentric or unique, but I was trying to do something that has been done before very well in my own way.    Like my spin on this sort of poem. But it IS personal, which may indicate a certain banality in my sensiblity! lol. But as I say... not every part of me is unique. I guess it's also a man's poem, in that it's based on a certain kind of male experience.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story