Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by UrzTrly 03-09-2008 19:09,   Hmmm Not sure I can be very constructive with this; I'm not sure I know enough about poetry to criticize helpfully.    I liked that it told a story, but I thought it might have been a little too similar to other love poems. Not really a bad thing in itself.    Its just after reading your story 'Red Demon' and thinking how strange and original it was, this poem felt like you were not trying to speak through your own voice and experiences.    I know a story and a poem are kind of different, but I would have liked to see more of the personality that I saw in 'Demon'...just in poem from.    I hope I wasn't too rambly...and keep up the good work.   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story