Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by UrzTrly 03-09-2008 17:37,   Well.... I'll admit the first couple of paragraphs had me wondering what the balls was going on. Wondering what the catch was.    I wasn't sure you might be alluding to something more than savagery & destitution as seen through the eyes of a child. But it was around this line:  'He loved the taste of locusts, even though most of the broth was made of chicken, it added something, and they were crunchy.'   that I decided to quit over-thinking & just enjoy.    Also, I'm sure I should be embarrassed to say that the bit between the Doctor & students went a little bit over my head. I believe I understand the basic gist, but could it be possible to ask for a summing up of that dialougue?    All in all I found it a very dark, interesting, & humorous journey. I didn't mind it was 'slow' in parts as you say; I think it unfolded very nicley.    Good job!   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story