Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by BritishRainDrop 03-09-2008 07:16,   Thanks guys!!!! These comments have gave me a great boost, so thankyou!!!  I read the bit about too many characters being introduced, and i think you might be right, but I aimed to try and show how close Ruby was to her friends, because for upcoming events, their bond is very important. Does anyone have any tips on how to show this while introducing the characters slower?    Thank you guys!!!   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story