Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Egoist 03-08-2008 20:02,   ... You're too funny. I'm not going to be rude, of course people don't expect bad criticism on their stories, but I appreciated it. Your advice is really helpful, I should've read this out loud sooner, it seems to cheesy now. Eventually I'll change it, but it was one of my older pieces I dug up. Thank you though, don't think you're being rude, you're being very honest.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story