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Posted by HP Phan
03-07-2008 18:28,
 
Yahaira
I like it. Short sentences. Very lyrical. I like how it sounds in my head. Another Hemingway (read Quintin's). Ever try Faulkner? With long sentences. OR Gabriel Garcia Marquez? "One Hundred Years in Solitude".
 
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