Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by PKLytle 03-07-2008 06:47,   ... Very natural. I read it twice and your use of Chekov still eludes me somewhat. I originally assumed the narrator's feelings toward the writer reflected the man's toward the woman, but I keep thinking there's something deeper than that. Nice work.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story