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03-05-2008 19:23,
What yer got goin' on here?
A still pill?
Dramatic sorrow yer can't ever swallow, it keeps coming back up because it seeks warmth and light found outside of life.
Not in yer blackened soul, that's where yer are suppose to store life's apathetic views.
Let 'em rot I tell yer. hehe
Let's see, sad, rhythm, rhyme:
Check, check, check...
Very well, yer appear to be in order here, rhyme on Sorrowful One, but not still.
'Anna