Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Sad Sara 03-05-2008 09:01,   Thank yer very much fer time in review Speaks fer yer character.But LOL,this is far from brainstorming.I want to write of love.Poetically opulent are verses written by a smitten Poet. I lack romance,so it's just depressing.Rather than crash in bed with 'we're doomed'I talk to me emotions.I have written about sixty verses fer the Easily Amused,and each verse I pick a cast.Like this one I chose Desire,Insanity, Reason,Logic,Impatience,Passio n.Lunacy,my pen,and meself to stave off sorrow.I would like to improve this,but don' know what else I to say to meself.I checked the thoughts outside the box,and second thoughts caught not a thought yet gotta lotta time in rhyme and nothing less to say,and I kinda sort of caught the thought I sought today.Love is my inanity,a tragic tale I know,so racing thoughts, and there are lots,are constantly aflow.Close to wisdom watch me come but lemme tell ya it is hard in nonsense to partake.But I want to make each verse the best that it can be,so yer thoughts Id love to help my Poetry.  'Anna   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story