Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Pez 03-05-2008 07:17,   Heh. The title, "they're all gonna laugh at you" reminded me of the movie: Carrie. Hehehe.    But on to the review:    I liked the first stanza, (I was telling myself, "this is going to be good") but after that I forced myself to read the rest. It just didn't live up to what the first stanza was offering.    I liked what you were trying to do. Having all of these mental states collide; interesting form of brainstorming.    I thought you could of done so much more with such a great concept. I was a little disappointed, I'm afraid.   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story