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09-11-2007 12:12,
at first, when it was mentioned the narrator knew this "perfect girl's" house in detail as well as her secrets and dreams I thought that this "perfect girl" WAS the narrator and wanted to commit suicide (that would of been a "sweet" twist, don't ya' think?... heh)... But then, the real malefactor was revealed. And now that I think of it, there are a few lines before the last one that hint on who the narrator is. Way to keep us guessing, though! Woot woot!
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