Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by gsaracen 03-02-2008 14:56,   Please Note! The new version is still descriptive, internal and a bit slow. I advise relaxed reading, maybe printing and reading two sessions, if you want.     It isn't really supposed to be a fast narrative, up until some parts at the end.    If anyone bothers to read it please do comment and criticize!  :)   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story