COME INTO MY ARMS - The Arrival, Chapter 1

Sophia saw the new arrival from her bedroom...

Just Wait...

dry your tears now up my dear bring back the...


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Posted by gsaracen
03-02-2008 02:13,
 
nice
very nice bait and switch. I know what the sort of relief is like. lol. It's like being interrupted during a suicide attempt, or having a deadline you aren't ready to meet extended at the last moment. 
 
Or an exam cancelled. lol. 
 
Very nice... specially how the sentences danced around and managed not to say anything that was false considering the ending.
 
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