A Healing

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Posted by Elizabeth
03-01-2008 03:21,
 
Oh dammit...
I just somehow knew what was the nature of this story, from the second paragraph, and it's irritating. This is well written, and it IS unpredictable, but still I failed to be surprised at the end. And I feel ashamed beacause of it; I would've wanted to tell that I had no idea about the ending, but, oh well, I just went and guessed the whole ingenius twist far too early. 
 
I'll give it a 5 still, 'cos I think this really is well written. And I guess I'll add this to my favourites, too...
 
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