Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Pez 02-29-2008 12:41,   Wow :O You're an excellent writer.     Savored each sentence, each figure of speech...     Words were very rich... Read this one slow and steady because of it.    I have no suggestions (you might have switched from past to present tense in a manner that isn't considered 'correct'... but I'm most likely wrong... not very accurate when it comes to spotting those...)    Can't believe I even wrote in that last part... I just couldn't find anything else that took away from this fine story.    High quality for sure. :)   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story