Marks Trilogy Part 1 - A Secret Life The smell was almost overpowering and it hit them... Unwanted Praise I listen to the people circled around me...

Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by R.E.Potter 02-28-2008 17:34,   ,,, The action was all but three sentences...any less and there wouldn't be a story. I keep my stories for this site around 1500 words so the reader might actually read it... but thanks for your comment.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story