The Letter He couldn't believe it. He looked down at the... The Spiders and Johnny Bailes The greenfly were the first to vanish, and the...

Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by cookingWine 02-28-2008 17:00,   Eh. Good opening and good sentences.   I could use more getting into how low it's gotten, a little more into the character and a little less into the action.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story