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02-27-2008 06:04,
I love it! Only one question. Shouldn't they be having mass for the three that sacrficed themselves also? If they did, that is. Good writing. A few grammatical errors here and there, but a good edit would fix those right up.
Keep on writing. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Sincerely,
IGW