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02-22-2008 06:09,
I was hoping that'd you get the symbolism. Yes, what I was trying to get across was that I don't believe war is right, and if you noticed in the end, she took everything off because of her natural beauty (peace), and wasn't killed because it (peace) was showing.
As for the war, I was thinking more towards the Middle East right now. My stepbrother is over there, his name's Jeff Starr, but the one time we saw his name in the "war obituaries" and we thought he truly died. It turned out to be another Jeff Starr, but I felt the same sadness for his family as I would've for mine. Jeff is coming back, sometime in spring, but he's been telling me about the war over there right now. A lot of his friends have suffered gruesome deaths, and a lot of them have ended it with suicide. So this is really where it might have come from.
Thanks for the advice, I didn't realize that I've been improving, that makes me confident, but as well, I didn't realize they weren't as smooth. Thank you once again.