Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Pez 02-18-2008 06:48,   ... What an odd woman... and odd man; he simply "drove into the sunset" after she had taken a deadly plunge.    I think this one needs a bit more polishing... some editing, and some more engaging descriptions; it was unusual, but it could of been stranger...    ...though I understand the story is being told by the man's point of view [therefore making it impossible for him to describe the climax very well (since he was looking elsewhere at the time)] a detailed description of her falling would of been awesome.   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story