Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Pez 02-15-2008 08:41,   Easy read. Twas gripping.  Descriptive and thrilling. Good job on imagery.    I'm beginning to relate to your 'protagonist'; and it's always good when the audience/readers can establish some type of connection with your characters.    I can already start to extract some of the lessons that will come of this...    Huh... I don't do this too often, but on to the next one...   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story