Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by My Opinion 02-14-2008 13:02,   well you ask me to review a story of yours and this is the one I picked. First of all, there are many grammar errors and misspelled words. pushing that aside, the story was good and you have upside, keep writing. But watch how your sentences run into each other. Punctuation is your friend, learn to use them properly. It can help convey emotion and attitude of your characters to the reader...thus making this story even better. I will read other things from you. I can see that talent is bursting to get out.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story