Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Pez 02-13-2008 08:53,   ... You became more descriptive on this one, especially in the beginning, so good job.    A lot of water in your stories.    Being burned alive seems hell'a painful. Wouldn't want that.    And I have thought of being stranded in the ocean with no vehicle. I'd never be able to keep myself on the surface for too long; and now there's a creature underneath me! Eek! I hope it's a friendly dolphin... though that's not likely...    You did a pretty good job here.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story