Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Pez 02-13-2008 08:11,   Good. Now drowning is definitely scary. I've almost drowned... hmm, let's see... 1, 2, 3... 4, yes 4 times. Each time was horrifying. I was so scared; I could of sworn on 3 out of those 4 that I was going to die. I'm feeling uneasy reminiscing... so, enough of that.    Walking in, what seems, a desolate area while it's dark is also pretty nerve-wrecking. Good job on emphasizing the paranoia. A stabbing is also definitely not a good 'way to go.'    I also think that the way you've walked us through each death experience is good, but could be better. An excellent description of things is what you should be concentrating on achieving in a piece like this one; so I'll suggest just a little more 'effort.' Though I did notice improvement from the previous entry.     Now on to the next one...   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story