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02-12-2008 10:37,
This is a nice poem, yes.. Though I find it pretty unnatural when the lines are sometimes divided like that; from between a sentence. It is so with both English and Finnish, and I guess in any language.
Still it's very nicely said, and it's made like an open letter, but yet it doesen't consider things too personal; it could be for anyone from anyone. But after all it is as important for both sides, who ever they were.