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02-12-2008 09:02,
Oh, this is a beautiful piece of writing, I think.
I liked the way the words rhymed in the third paragraph; it's so easy with English when there are those ing-words...
The other paragraphs also fitted the pattern well, though in them the rhymes weren't so ... well, rhyming. :)
As an entity this poem summons up a desire that everyone has sometimes, a desire of having a true friend. Lucky are those who have it...