Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Dirkin 02-11-2008 21:20,   ... Ok i decided to give this a shot. This is a very surreal tale, so far. I like the peculiarities you have created, the black and white rules, the hidden society that wage war on humans. I think you made the characters act unique, micha being scared and only interested in her boyfriend. I'm a little confused by the way you word things, I guess thats a cultural thing. Do you spell zurk, zork, zerk differently on purpose? I think you will find that long stories like this unfortunately get missed by readers on this site, but I will read the second part soon and tell you what I think.   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story