Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by C.R. Vard 02-11-2008 14:04,   well written good imagery, liked the flashback.    'There weren’t many clouds, there were only six.' the comma should be a semi-colon...and I really don't like the use of a specific number in this case, doesn't convey any emotion.   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story