Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by C.R. Vard 02-11-2008 13:56,   ... a sweet little poem...my only problem was word choice. 'large apple tree' doesn't convey any of your emotions about the tree, and in such a short poem, one word can make a big difference   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story