Better Day Tomorrow Walking the streets and not going home after work... Unwanted Praise I listen to the people circled around me...

Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Pez 02-11-2008 11:01,   ... Agh! What a disturbing thing to be curious about... death. I liked how the main character was monotonous throughout the whole predicament. That adds to the 'horror' effect.    You could of meant something by the 'drowning family' (as Tarhead suggests) but I think it was more of a visual aid... for their flailing arms... but I dunno.    But, overall, good job.   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story