Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by tarhead 02-10-2008 07:05,   very good language use. that was one of those rare "wait until the room is empty, read it out loud with intent" pieces.    fun to read. a good role playing poem that would carry well to a stage for a 30 second presentation. it could just as easily be applied to real time conflict...    "forward!" he cried from the rear and the front line died...   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story