Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Elizabeth 02-10-2008 06:40,   Wow... Well, this sure was a good story, though a bit too predictable, at least for me. Somehow I just gueassed that the man chasing the main character was the asthma patient from the café...  Luckily there was still this part where the man jumped from the window; I didn't expect anyhting like that, so it kind of drew my respect back to this story.    A fine story it still is.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story