Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by R.E.Potter 02-10-2008 06:39,   ,,, Great story, My only suggestion is that you proof read your story before posting it. The first line might need to be re-written. Other then that, like everyone else who submits, there are a few grammar error's on this story. Over all, graett story...oops..see what I mean.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story