Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Acid Rain 02-09-2008 13:42,   ... Actually the point of the story is how women make men feel when theyre together. And also a reference to my drinking not being able to be controlled by my lady friend and how it will ruin everything. But I guess I didnt allow that to be evident in the story, so maybe I should try and make it a little more obvious.    I believe ugly words are good in stories. Irvine Welsh and Charles Bukowski are good examples. I love those guys. I've got a pretty dirty mouth in real life, so I guess that shows in my writing.    Thanks for your input, keep up the good work.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story