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Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by darknstormy 02-07-2008 04:06,   Two cents worth! One should be constructive in giving criticism - not rude. Constructive criticism is important if one is to improve one's writing skills. I also see no harm in being a 'grammar policeman' - or a 'spelling policeman' for that matter. There is nothing worse than sloppy grammar and poor spelling to spoil (at least for me) what could be a good story.  Having said that, I'm glad that most agree that the original posting does not really qualify as a 'short story.'   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story