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02-06-2008 04:17,
I'm in awe, you all noticed my error's. No, I am no English major, nor do I claim to be one, Infact, I am not a critic at all. I'm just someone who will point out an obvious when everyone else is afraid to do so. I will never tell you or anyone they are a terrible writer, just that maybe a class or two might really be beneficial. It's great that everyone claims brilliance on every story, but is that fair to the thirteen year old who you will mislead. Someone who love's to write but see's no reason for improvement. This site I believe was not set up as a kiss ass site, as Baethan Dawn appears to be with you. I shall change my user name to "my opinion" to apease those who do not like my honesty... as I see it. Maybe I'm being to harsh on a story that is clearly pointless, and a story obviously that was put up as a joke. I have read a lot of great stories from poeple who are amatures that have great potential, and I let them know.