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Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Pez 01-31-2008 12:43,   It was nice... to read a poem that actually told a story.     these were my favorite lines:    1. "at that point his heart shook his rib cage, and he fell on his back    2. he was being brought up to be repaired in his maker's shack"    There's something about the word, 'rib cage' that I like, and the other line was great. It made me think there was a struggle between him living and dying & the image it summoned was pretty cool. Good job.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story