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01-29-2008 07:02,
Hmm...I wonder why you felt as though the girl would die...I don't know, was it when Eli gave out his infamous "bang" which you thought he'd do it to the girl?...Or was it when he boy was running to her, you thought she would follow?...Or was it from the beginning? I'd find it interesting on when you thought she'd be the one to die.
Thanks for the comment, it makes me feel good that I ended it with a twist of him dying instead of what you expected out of her dying.