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Posted by Pez
01-28-2008 10:11,
 
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much can even enable unacceptable behavior.  
 
An example: "God that woman is a slut, she easily succumbs to men's desires" 
 
"Hold on. Don't judge her too harshly, she grew up without a father." 
 
See? Again, I know people have issues, but we need to deal with them in a responsible and sane manner. I think a person who sleeps around because she didn't have a male figure in her life should know that having sex with random men isn't too healthy or morally correct, even if she pains over not having a father.  
 
In the poem, the therapist should have pointed out that the girl wasn't insane, but going through normal teenage episodes. But he wants the cash you see.  
 
And just in case you were wondering, the line: 
 
"I've begun to believe that she loves herself. 
 
That incessant squeaking. 
 
That fathomless breathing."  
 
is making reference to her daughters masturbating.  
 
Well, I think I've said too much.
 
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