Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by C.R. Vard 01-24-2008 16:57,   ... I liked the concept of the story, but there were numerous gramatical problems...the storyline was very good, made me want to keep reading. You also seemed to skip a large section of the story around the 15th paragraph   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story