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01-24-2008 07:14,
'So There I Was 3.' Hmm, O.K, unless the barbell- looking device is a Time Machine or something I'm at a loss. Though I liked the ending. I imagined a man in slick, black suit, with hair pushed back and greased. Fine dressing shoes and a savvy look on his face. Dunno why. I really like the unexpected peculiarities you come up with in the end. :)