Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Reverand 01-19-2008 14:12,   Excellent Story Line I loved the story line, but there were a lot of typographical errors. I think it just needs to be proof read. Beyond that, it was creepy. I especially loved the ending. "Come out, Come out where ever you are!" Perfect for a good scare.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story