Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by psYchic_spOnge 01-18-2008 15:33,   ... who was speaking in the first person at the beginning? was it the king or the architect? and why did you leave that secluded at the beginning and only write in 3rd person for the rest of the story?  I thought it was good, if not slightly anticlimactic at the end.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story