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01-16-2008 09:03,
The short sharp sentences intensify the emotions. I just got a little confuse with the time line at one point. Did the sexual encounter occurred years before the mother found out? When I first read the story I understood that it had just happened. However, after a second reading it appears that it did occur years earlier.
Good emotional description.